Sunday, May 31, 2015

My Most Favourite Journal Entry!

We were given a few different dialogues to construct a story around. Here's my story:

"Look at the garden!" said grandma Ruby. She was a total freak when it came to her garden, she always wanted it neat, organized and perfect. Seeing that huge mess made by animals that came overnight made her sick and extremely angry. She lived all by herself in her huge mansion and her husband grandpa Kevin. He liked travelling so much that even at the age of 70, he was travelling the country all on his own, worry free about grandma Ruby or anyone else. 

Grandma Ruby was so mad about her garden but then she got a phone call saying grandpa Kevin had fallen ill. Her day had just gotten even worse, but she made her way to the railway station as soon as possible and got on the train to Saskatchewan where grandpa was. On the train, she met a woman in her early 30s named Nancy. Nancy built rockets for NASA and was headed for Saskatchewan for her new mission. Grandma was really amazed by Nancy's stories and had a great time on the train despite her worries and the bad day she'd been having. 

After a long and tiring ride, grandma got to the place where grandpa Kevin was staying. It was quite weird to be a hospital and looked a lot like a tower with no windows and looked very creepy. However, she got there and couldn't find grandpa and she got very worried and asked some nearby people if they had seen him. The lady in red said "he left a letter and a key". Grandma read the letter that had said "your husband has been kidnapped, get to 1255 Willow Dale Rd. and unlock the door with this key". 

She had no idea where the address was but the local taxi took her exactly where she needed to be. It looked like a large convention center made of wood. Grandma quickly rushed her way to the entrance and unlocked the door and as soon as she walked in "SURPRIIIIIIIIIISEEEE" yelled everyone. There was grandpa and all family friends and relatives. At first, grandma was very puzzled but then had been reminded that it was her birthday. Despite her bad day, and garden being destroyed, it was the most adventurous birthday she had really enjoyed at the end of the day. After celebrating grandma's birthday, they all headed back to Ontario, and lived happily ever after. 

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